Roller Coaster Narrative

Roller Coaster

My sister and I went on a roller coaster. My mom and dad thought the ride was too scary, but we went on it anyway. Let me tell you about it. . . .
I pulled my sister, Sarah, to the roller coaster. The Fire-bolt was the fastest ride in the whole world. As we walked closer to the Fire-bolt, we could hear faint roars coming from the Fire-bolt. The ground was also shaking like crazy! I put two arms on Sarah, so she could not get away. We could hear people shouting so loud, I could not hear myself thinking! It was almost our turn as the grown-ups in front of us stepped on. Sarah’s face turned bright red. We finally stepped on, but I didn’t mind the long wait. I still wished we were at the back of the line.
I held my breath and decided