Ride Descriptive Writing

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Everyone is ready for the ride to start. There was excitement painted on all of our faces on the ride. My hands grip onto the bars tightly as I get this look written all over my face. The ride starts its sways side to side and I can't smell the fair food the sweet smell of funnel cake was gone in a blink. I close eyes as I hear people screaming with excitement. we sway side to side fast. We didn’t stop my face was painted with a smile. The ride hasn’t slowed down and my my eyes are shut all I hear is screams. I peak open my eyes to see my friends watching me and I close my eyes very quickly. We start to slow down but not very fast so I crack my eyes open and it's not over but i'm not as scared so I keep my eyes open. We stop eventually so I wait for the worker to lift the bar so I can jump down… After I finally get down because the seats are high up I run to the exit and out. …show more content…
We also talked about the funnel cake I had because it was a oreo covered funnel cake with different icing things on it. We talked about this boat ride that we didn't like it was also the only ride that we didn't like well raelin was scared when we went on one of the ferris wheels because she was afraid of heights. But then she was ok with it . So it was almost 10:00pm so we were all tired so we said our goodbyes even though we would probably see each other the next day they live right across the

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