Ribs: A Short Story

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Silhouette of a figure smoking a cigarette to compress their depression Ribs are nothing but an empty cage black hole in their chest Skull shattering from the dull chatter filling empty rooms Always boasting his emotions on how he’s so broken Think he’s joking when he’s talking about blowing his head open Till the moment you walk in and find his body motionless Drinking till his liver stopped working slowly dying before he’s 30 Down on his knee’s cant you see his plea? Trying to get the highest so he can overdose and die
He wants to die and blame his addiction
Can’t you see him drowning? Joking about the rope just to cope with his problems Dancing and bouncing just to forget Till he gets home just to tie knots and slit his

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