His structure creates the rhythm and flow while his diction adds a poetic quality that makes all the elements unify. However, in paragraph 10, he suddenly breaks the unity by shifting his tone with the line, “racial denigration from ugly, stupid people.” The break this line creates due to the unexpected harsh diction is quickly brought back together in the next paragraph, line 2, “They watch even now in acquiescent silence.” Alliteration is subtly but effectively used in the phrase “acquiescent silence” to bring back the flow in the article. Later, Pitts is able to tie together his central idea, which is especially conveyed through his usage of anaphora in paragraph 13. He repeats the phrase “too many” to communicate that there are too many ignorant and bigoted people in the nation to allow the issue of racism to be addressed properly. Pitts wants Americans—specifically blacks and whites—to be unified, but he understands that this cannot happen unless each group recognizes racism as a problem that is still prevalent in modern society. By utilizing diction to both break apart and unify his piece, Pitts is able to express this desire through his
His structure creates the rhythm and flow while his diction adds a poetic quality that makes all the elements unify. However, in paragraph 10, he suddenly breaks the unity by shifting his tone with the line, “racial denigration from ugly, stupid people.” The break this line creates due to the unexpected harsh diction is quickly brought back together in the next paragraph, line 2, “They watch even now in acquiescent silence.” Alliteration is subtly but effectively used in the phrase “acquiescent silence” to bring back the flow in the article. Later, Pitts is able to tie together his central idea, which is especially conveyed through his usage of anaphora in paragraph 13. He repeats the phrase “too many” to communicate that there are too many ignorant and bigoted people in the nation to allow the issue of racism to be addressed properly. Pitts wants Americans—specifically blacks and whites—to be unified, but he understands that this cannot happen unless each group recognizes racism as a problem that is still prevalent in modern society. By utilizing diction to both break apart and unify his piece, Pitts is able to express this desire through his