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Are you giving instructions or informing? Do you list circumstances or a sequence of events? My essay describes how to make homemade tortellini soup. I give explicit instructions on how to make the dish. I also list some circumstances that may determine how the soup turns out in the end.
Are your “steps” organized chronologically or in order of importance? Why? The steps are organized chronologically because it would be impossible to make the soup correctly unless the reader knows where to begin and where to end. Recipes are almost always written chronologically because it less confusing.
Do you explain each step clearly and sufficiently? I do explain each step clearly and sufficiently. I do not leave out any details of the process. I use
Are your details specific and not vague? Most of my details are specific, and only a few are vague. I give specific measurements needed to make both the dough and the filler, but I do leave out the fact that measuring cups are needed, which should be changed. Sometimes I use words like “small” to describe the amount, but later I give a better explanation of what I