She uses some alliterations at the beginning of some of her sentences, such as “In most cases”, “But while”, “In the beginning”, etc. But she does not add many of them, which overall weakens her arguments. The words she uses are quite simple too. They don't have much complexity to them. Although the does add a lot of evidence to support her idea, she has some flaws that will bring her argument down. The entire purpose of this essay is to persuade the reader into wanting to make a change about hunger with children in the summer time. Overall, this piece is good, it has a good argument from her use of evidence and context words. Anna wants to get the news out about the lack of food in children during the summer time. The awareness is shown through this essay. In conclusion, the essay is persuasive and she should get her point across to the viewer. She could have used more complex words but the ones that she did use were
She uses some alliterations at the beginning of some of her sentences, such as “In most cases”, “But while”, “In the beginning”, etc. But she does not add many of them, which overall weakens her arguments. The words she uses are quite simple too. They don't have much complexity to them. Although the does add a lot of evidence to support her idea, she has some flaws that will bring her argument down. The entire purpose of this essay is to persuade the reader into wanting to make a change about hunger with children in the summer time. Overall, this piece is good, it has a good argument from her use of evidence and context words. Anna wants to get the news out about the lack of food in children during the summer time. The awareness is shown through this essay. In conclusion, the essay is persuasive and she should get her point across to the viewer. She could have used more complex words but the ones that she did use were