I have recently read your publicize article “Hip Hop Planet” in this article, McBride was trying to make his audience understand about hip hop and how it influences us. Mr.McBride I understand what you're trying to explain to the readers so they understand hip hop a little more but i’m going to have to find out more about this on this. I think that you could’ve been more persuasive towards the readers and been more opinionated because your writing what you had thought about hip hop and how it influences our planet. Also McBride needed to be more happy about what he was writing instead of mad or whatever he was. I believe Mr.McBride wants us to know how to express ourselves in ways we would’ve never known about us. How McBride tries to convey
