Rhetorical Analysis Of College Pressures By William Zinsser

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“One of the few rights that America does not proclaim is the right to fail. Achievement is the national god.” The article “College Pressures” by William Zinsser makes several points about the stress placed on the shoulders of modern-day college students. William Zinsser is a master at Branford College, a residential college at Yale University. This article suggests several ideas on how college students should approach their future careers.The author of this article uses rhetorical situations, rhetorical appeals, and clear organization to efficiently present his ideas. In this article, the author displays exigence, audience appeal, and purpose for writing.
This work is driven by a man that wants to help college students feeling the pressure to succeed. “What I wish for all students is some release from the clammy grip of the future. I wish them a chance to savor each segment of their education as an experience in itself and not as a grim preparation for the next step.” This quote blatantly shows how the author of this article wants to help college students. This information must be told because someone with experience needs to keep college students from cracking under the pressure. “I see four kinds of pressure working on college students today: economic pressure, parental pressure, peer pressure, and self-induced pressure. It is easy to look around for villains - But there are are
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The author advises young adults to enjoy their college experience. Zinsser uses a plethora of pathos evidence mixed with a bit of logos to convince his audience. He utilizes an organizational strategy consisting of pathos followed by logos. All of these aspects combined proves to be quite effective at convincing his audience. I challenge young adults heading to college to find at least an hour each day to do something

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