This is my response to Brian Doucet and Philp`s “In Detroit ‘ruin porn’ ignores the voices of those who still call the city home and recommendation for publication in the Shorthorn. In my opinion I believe the authors piece will be unpersuasive to the readers and not to be published in the Shorthorn. The readers will find the piece interesting for wanting to know why people still call Detroit their home even after all the ruin porn. Within this piece Doucet and Philp gives some reasons on why the people will only find this interesting and not be persuaded.
Doucet and Philip central claim throughout the article is that they disapprove of ruin porn. Both authors give supporting ideas on how they disapprove of ruin porn and …show more content…
The article speaks on how ruin porn only focuses on the bad side of the town and ignores the good side. By the authors speaking about this the readers won’t want to read the article because this isn’t happening in Texas it’s happening in a different state so why would they care about this. The readers won’t do anything about this problem for it not happening in Texas but in the city of Detroit.
Another reason supporting the central claim of the authors is when there is political fragmentation. The ruin porn is being used as a profit and stripping the city of its history and cultural. The authors don’t agree with this method of using the ruin porn to make a quick buck. With this it is destroying the city even more and making it harder for people to want to live there.
Pathos is used almost everywhere in this article it speaks of how the city is getting destroyed of its history and humanity by simply destroying the image of Detroit. The authors speak of how 60,000 properties are being evicted and of those 40,000 of those properties are being occupied. Also of how 10% of the population of Detroit are at risk of losing their homes this year. The authors are trying to make you feel bad for the city but in the attempt to do so they don’t give enough detail to make the reader do something about the problem with the ruin porn in