Through the process of revising, I have learned that it is important to consider all possible feedback given to you by peers and the instructor. With the feedback that I receive, I was able to reevaluate my mistakes or revise a paragraph that may need clarification. In my first essay draft, I was able to receive effective feedback on areas that I needed to revise and it helped improve my transitions in my second draft. From the revising process, I have learned that the way I revise my essays is different from when my peers revise my essays. My instructor and peers are able to discover omitted parts and mistakes in my essay which I would not find when revising my papers. During my writing process, I have learned that I would write down ideas
