Resume 36
While reviewing resume 36 my first of impression of the resume was that everything was spread heavily from the left to the right. I feel like when an interviewer is looking at a resume the person is usually looking for the key points for the job description. Which in this case everything is very scattered and hard to look for the key points. Also another thing I saw within this resume is that the person did not stay consistent with their bullets or dates. For example, in the skills section everything is inputted into a bullet format. Which is okay, but everything else should follow the bullet format to make it look more professional and more appealing. Also staying on the subject on staying consistent in the section Awards and Recognitions …show more content…
The sections are not listed correctly according to the lecture or PowerPoint. For example, it just be listed as education background first, work or professional experience, skills or certifications, and any another additional info that might make you look better to the employer. In resume 38 education is listed in the middle of the resume then certifications are listed at the bottom. By doing that it making the resume look very weak and very hard to find the key points of what makes you look different from everyone else. Another thing I see wrong is that Professional Summary is a bunch of repetitive information. For example, you talk Office 365 like in three bullets. That just of bunch of repetitive information to make your resume look longer. Also another thing is that you state the “I have.” Why don’t you state what did you do to make yourself feel like that? Don’t try to self yourself out that fast. Besides those issues you got the basics of what a resume but needs lots of improvement of format and quality. Refer back to the sample resume that might give you an idea on how to make yourself look good …show more content…
You hit all the major things that should be on a resume. For example, your objective, education/highlights, your skills/abilities, and work experience. I like how the resume was put from strongest to weakest sections. The resume sold it self and made you look very god on paper. You were able to describe yourself in the best possible on the resume. Just one thing in opinion you should put your grade point average under education. Employers are always asking for that while looking for a job in engineering. Also in the sample resume under backboard it has the grade point average under education, I would consider doing that. Besides that, resume 39 is a solid and well formatted
While reviewing resume 36 my first of impression of the resume was that everything was spread heavily from the left to the right. I feel like when an interviewer is looking at a resume the person is usually looking for the key points for the job description. Which in this case everything is very scattered and hard to look for the key points. Also another thing I saw within this resume is that the person did not stay consistent with their bullets or dates. For example, in the skills section everything is inputted into a bullet format. Which is okay, but everything else should follow the bullet format to make it look more professional and more appealing. Also staying on the subject on staying consistent in the section Awards and Recognitions …show more content…
The sections are not listed correctly according to the lecture or PowerPoint. For example, it just be listed as education background first, work or professional experience, skills or certifications, and any another additional info that might make you look better to the employer. In resume 38 education is listed in the middle of the resume then certifications are listed at the bottom. By doing that it making the resume look very weak and very hard to find the key points of what makes you look different from everyone else. Another thing I see wrong is that Professional Summary is a bunch of repetitive information. For example, you talk Office 365 like in three bullets. That just of bunch of repetitive information to make your resume look longer. Also another thing is that you state the “I have.” Why don’t you state what did you do to make yourself feel like that? Don’t try to self yourself out that fast. Besides those issues you got the basics of what a resume but needs lots of improvement of format and quality. Refer back to the sample resume that might give you an idea on how to make yourself look good …show more content…
You hit all the major things that should be on a resume. For example, your objective, education/highlights, your skills/abilities, and work experience. I like how the resume was put from strongest to weakest sections. The resume sold it self and made you look very god on paper. You were able to describe yourself in the best possible on the resume. Just one thing in opinion you should put your grade point average under education. Employers are always asking for that while looking for a job in engineering. Also in the sample resume under backboard it has the grade point average under education, I would consider doing that. Besides that, resume 39 is a solid and well formatted