Reflective Final Project: My Experience At A Restaurant

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Robel Haile
Sylvia Wolak
English 160
11/21/2017
Reflective Final Project
The genre of my writing project one was the “Review.” The task of this assignment was to write a 2 to 3-page review of any cultural event or venue from a Chicago neighborhood. Thus, I reviewed a restaurant and based on the task, I included a brief history of the restaurant, décor evaluation, Food/menu evaluation and a conclusion typical “the bottom line” style of the RedEye in my review. I was also required to write a cover letter to let my instructor know explaining why I chose the restaurant, and how I worked within the genre to bring out the aspects of the restaurant, and why it’s important to review. In addition, I wrote the cover letter to let my instructor know the overall theme and message I was trying to send.
I had many challenges to overcome to successfully finish my writing project one because it was my first writing
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In addition, my writing project three was an argumentative essay and it was one of the toughest essays I have written for my English 160. The task of this assignment was to write 5 to 6 pages of an argumentative essay that focuses on an issue that I care about in Chicago. I was also required to use a minimum of 5 sources to support my claim.
In this writing project, I had some challenges I had to overcome to successfully finish my writing project three because for the argumentative essay I wrote in high school, I was free to use any sources while I was required to use only scholarly sources for my writing project three. Additionally, I also struggled on writing a strong thesis for my writing project three, but I sought help from the writing center and learned tips on how to write a strong thesis. After seeking help from the writing center, I successfully wrote a strong thesis. An example of that will be as the

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