This poem does not have as good as turn as the poem by Carol Ann Duffy. When Alicia describes the how Demeter saw Persephone, it is a sad description. In the middle of the poem, lines 6-9, Alicia writes “I waited and was patient finally you emerged and were immediately soaked you stared at me without love in your large eyes that were filled with black sex and white powder.”(Ostriker 6-9) This shows that Demeter can see that her daughter is hurt and this makes Demeter feel hurt. One can almost think that Demeter can feel Persephone’s pain from all that she has been through. As the poem goes on it says that Demeter would expect this from her daughter. When Demeter says this she starts to embrace her daughter and comfort her. This is the time when spring shows up in the poem. This would be a point where Demeter is happy to see her daughter and that as she gets her daughter back the ‘seasons’ lighten up and become spring.
These two poems complement each other in different ways. The poem Demeter is a base that gives details from how Demeter was heart broken from her daughter being kidnapped to her slowly mending her heart back together when her daughter comes back to her. The second poem, Demeter to Persephone, would help the end of the Demeter poem; this poem is almost like a sequel to the first poem. Demeter to Persephone helps the reader understand how Demeter knows