My remediation consisted of transforming my academic persuasive essay into a casual Twitter essay. With these changes in genre also came changes in the audience, the tone of the text, and writing conventions to better adjust the needs and format of Twitter and its users. In regards to the audience, my persuasive essay targeted the general U.S population because I wanted to bring awareness to all citizens. However, for my remediation the target audience was more narrow, that being the young generation of the U.S. By targeting a smaller and more specific group in the U.S, I planned to bring awareness to the issue along with forming a call to action from my generation. With such an adjustment, I hoped to instigate change through this new audience
