After receiving writing project two, it was a bit complicated for me to write about how can the bonds that he forms can help him grow and mature or why is it important and necessary. When I thought of something and free write it, I find it hard for myself to exactly put what I want to write in a form that would make sense with my paper. I couldn’t get my thought across if I try to make it sound good and not just a free write. I often thought, “what if my professor doesn’t get or did I answer her question write about this area?” As I was revising writing two, I put a lot of thoughts down and try to answer in a way that makes sense to the feedback that was given. It truly made me think about the whole paper as I was rewriting and fixing the paper as I was reading back what I previously wrote for feedback. At some point, I went back to look at project writing one and how I wrote it. I can tell that what I wrote here and there did not sound the same and I somehow felt writing two sounds weird. After rereading and rewriting what I want to explain, I made sure it makes sense and connects. The feedback was an eye opener to what I missed to include and to make sure the reader understands what I meant to say. It also made sure that I, as the writer understood what I wrote and how it can make me to become a better writer as I think about these …show more content…
I loved the feedback section because this is how I can improve as a writer. I use to think that the more marks that I get was because I was not a good writer, however, seeing these feedbacks helped me write a better paper. Although, I don’t think that project writing two is at a full potential, I did the best of what I can do. In writing these project, I can see that I need more improvement however, improving little by little is better than not improving at all. I figure for myself, writing will always be a challenge that I need to work on nevertheless, it is not something I hate because writing can be creative in many different ways and it can be as fun, sad and adventuress to anyone who choose to