The area that needs the most improvement is the opening and closing. I have a hard time thinking of creative ways to begin the essay. Although, I think the closing paragraph is harder to write because it has to connect to the introduction paragraph without repeating the same thoughts. The way I try to overcome this problem is by having a teacher or a friend look over the rough draft so, they are able to suggest the area that needs improvement. Another weakness in my writing is critical thinking of a quote or evidence. Instead of providing a deeper meaning to a quote, I tend to summarize it. Also, I tend to repeat myself when attempting to analyze because I do not know what else to say. I also need to also work on properly formatting the works cited. Sometimes for assignments I get points off for having too much space in the
The area that needs the most improvement is the opening and closing. I have a hard time thinking of creative ways to begin the essay. Although, I think the closing paragraph is harder to write because it has to connect to the introduction paragraph without repeating the same thoughts. The way I try to overcome this problem is by having a teacher or a friend look over the rough draft so, they are able to suggest the area that needs improvement. Another weakness in my writing is critical thinking of a quote or evidence. Instead of providing a deeper meaning to a quote, I tend to summarize it. Also, I tend to repeat myself when attempting to analyze because I do not know what else to say. I also need to also work on properly formatting the works cited. Sometimes for assignments I get points off for having too much space in the