Reflective Essay: Chapter 11 Analysis

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Chapter eleven has provided a lot of templates that I need to review and revise. I am currently in the process of writing my research paper and when I edit it, these templates will definitely provide a good list to check off. At one point, it asked if I had reminded the readers what others argue regarding the topic at several points during my writing, I wondered if it would be alright to put all the opposing arguments in one section. These would be my Naysayers. I was also reminded in this chapter to recheck how I stated, placed, and explained my quotes.
The revised essay in the chapter was very helpful and I am quite amazed that a high school student wrote that. I was further impressed that the student went to Harvard and then Berkley for

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