A Narrative Essay About The First Time I Went Away

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Tanay Bartwal Core ½
First Time Adam: I watched my mom putting my clothes into my suitcase, as I was getting ready for the big trip; the warmth of the clothes bursting out into the house; the neatly folded clothes finding a new home: my new Star Wars suitcase. It was September 16, the day before the big field trip. We were going to an overnight camp to learn about science and nature. The part I wasn’t forward looking to was, since I have came to this new school I haven’t made a single friend. I have been in school for eight years now, and I have never been on a trip like this before, nor have I been away from home by myself.
Jake: The field trip was going to be so awesome! Finally I get to be away from my sister and won’t have my mom pestering me about my homework. Best part was Damian, Dylan, Cole, and Max were in the same cabin as me. Once
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This was going to work out perfectly. All the plans were laid and were ready for action.
Adam: “VRRR” that was the groan of the bus pulling into D-Average Middle School, Jake changed the sign of Dexter Middle to D-Average so the bus drivers got delayed a bit. My only concern during this field trip was Jake. I just didn’t want him to ruin this new experience.
Michael: We reached and had lunch, I tried to act as usual as possible during lunch with him, he didn’t seem to notice though. At six o'clock the movie would start so once it would be 6:30 I would have to break this friendship.
Adam: I couldn’t wait for the movie it was my favorite, Mrs. Doubtfire. Some time later Michael said “Oh my gosh, during the hike my inhaler fell, out of my pocket.” For one thing I knew, Michael was severely allergic to peanuts if an incident occurred and he didn’t have his inhaler, it wouldn’t be a pretty scene. “We are going to have to got to the woods” I told him. He nodded

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