Within the essay, I was able to expound on the lesson’s that Siddhartha’s teachers taught him; from which, Hesse taught me. This essay stands out from to me because I learned how to effectively write and tie a conclusion back into the paper I had worked so hard on. In the beginning, I was lackadaisical with my writing; so much so that my MLA formatting was consistently incorrect. The emotion that came to me after reviewing my portfolio and noticing that was a pure disappointment. Conversely, I was impressed and surprised with how much my writing has evolved over the semester. It is obvious that the handwork that I put into writing my essay’s started to pay off, making my below average essays into ones of college
Within the essay, I was able to expound on the lesson’s that Siddhartha’s teachers taught him; from which, Hesse taught me. This essay stands out from to me because I learned how to effectively write and tie a conclusion back into the paper I had worked so hard on. In the beginning, I was lackadaisical with my writing; so much so that my MLA formatting was consistently incorrect. The emotion that came to me after reviewing my portfolio and noticing that was a pure disappointment. Conversely, I was impressed and surprised with how much my writing has evolved over the semester. It is obvious that the handwork that I put into writing my essay’s started to pay off, making my below average essays into ones of college