Reflective Essay: One Of California's Biggest Problems

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This was the first time that I ever had to write ten pages. When we first talk about doing this essay I was thinking “oh ten pages that's not that bad I can do this with no problem.” Then when I actually received the assignment I started to think differently. When I was planning out what to add to the research and where all of my ideas would fit in I began to think that even though I had all of these ideas it still would not fill up all ten pages. Trying to write ten full pages was the hardest part of this research paper. The easiest part was choosing the topic because the drought is one of California's biggest problems and I take interest in this topic because it has a lot to do with agriculture and that is what I grown up around my whole life. If I was going to do the research paper again I would have put more time into it. I feel that I could have put more in to it than I did. I didn't do it all last minute which is good but a big portion
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Now that I look back and think if only I had changed that one little thing I could have gotten a better grade. Scoring a 169 out 200 really bugged me because it was not good enough to get that one extra point to make it a 170 out of 200 points. The day after the this research paper was due I went to see the preview of a documentary called “Dry Harvest” as I watching that preview and listening to the people at the ceremony talk I was thinking “ I wrote most of this stuff in research paper” but there were a few things that I was like “ wow I wish I would have known that before I turned in that research paper.” It was to bad that I couldn't go to that ceremony before the research paper was due. Although the ceremony did help when it came to my research paper presentation because I added some of that information that I didn't add to my research paper. I wanted to show part of the preview as part of my presentation but I couldn't find it

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