One of the first recurrent mistakes that I made in the first draft of my composition was spelling out names and adding too many letters. For example, when I tried to spell out my father’s name. I wrote his name as jota-a-y griega-uve-i-e-ere. This spells out the name Jayvier. His name is properly spelled jota-a-uve-i-e-ere, which spells out Javier. It was mistake because Jayvier is not a real name while Javier is actually my father’s real name. The second reoccurring mistake I was making in my original draft was forgetting to add articles before the objects. This resulted in a missing article or determinant mark, “A” on my paper. That is not proper grammar in Spanish. For example, I did not add “ las” and “los” before “matemáticas” and “deportes”.
