Reanna, overall, I feel as though you easily expressed your argument and were able to support your thesis with evidence. I, also, am impressed that you thought to use technology to enhance your image for a better understanding of the piece and by doing so, you were able to really grasp what the piece had to offer. Additonally, I am attaching a copy of your essay that I have read theough and noted a few suggestion about the phrasing of words. However, you do not have to follow them if you do not agree with them or find them
