I was happy with my first essay because I really tried to make the stories and memories come to life. Assignment 1 was easy also because it was something that many people experienced and went through. In assignment 2 and the reading response I was happy with my use of evidence and images. For the reading response I made sure that …show more content…
In all of my essays I tried to have my paragraphs follow a certain format. For my conclusion I would like to believe that my purpose is extended into it and that I give my readers some final things to think about. I know that I can definitely improve on my hooks between sentences and paragraphs with time I think this will become more natural for me.
I believe that my voice can be found throughout all of my papers. I didn’t really struggle with coming up with thoughts for these papers because they were important and meant something. I actively tried to make sure I kept up with the MLA standards but certain things can definitely slip though. My grammar and punctuation always need improvement. That’s why I wished that the reading response could have been turned in as a first draft so I could have got some feedback on it before I had to submit it for my portfolio.
In all my essays I tried to relate to the readers by adding specific examples that they can relate to. In other papers I need to make sure I keep doing this. I need improvement on the comprehension of my papers. What I’m thinking doesn’t clearly come out on paper