Rafiah: Well Done ! Keep Up The Good Work

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Rafiah is a hardworking member of the class. She always listens attentively and puts a lot of effort into everything she does. Rafiah reads clearly and fluently. She has some great opinions and is starting to quote and refer to the text to justify her answers. Rafiah is beginning to use inference and deduction but needs to keep working on this. Well done! Keep up the good work.

Rafiah has worked hard on her written skills and can use a range of imaginative language in her writing to engage the reader. She uses a range of punctuation in her writing appropriately and her spellings are mostly accurate. Rafiah’s presentation is very good and she takes pride in her work. Well done! Keep up the good work Rafiah.

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