When I first started reading, I didn’t see where the author was going with her essay and what points she was trying to make. I was very uninterested until she started elaborating on the importance of home. I would have liked it if Quindlen included a hook or a glimpse of her main idea in the first, or even the second paragraph. That would have drawn the reader in and made them curious about the rest of the essay.
Other than the beginning, I loved the essay. Quindlen made a lot of strong points. Ever since I can remember, I‘ve always had a certain kind of love and compassion towards those without a home. I remember feeling powerless that I couldn’t help them so I would watch videos of other people doing so. I haven’t met anyone who was passionate
Other than the beginning, I loved the essay. Quindlen made a lot of strong points. Ever since I can remember, I‘ve always had a certain kind of love and compassion towards those without a home. I remember feeling powerless that I couldn’t help them so I would watch videos of other people doing so. I haven’t met anyone who was passionate