After we finish the Inquiry 3, we did the Inquiry 4 which is transfer the text into media. I chose Prezi as my way to present. Because I often use Prezi which provides many sources and it is much better than the traditional PowerPoint. The good side of remediate our essay, using picture and video can better and more vivid to explain our thought and let the audience to enjoy into it. As I learned before in the English 109 class, Professor taught us we can use Ethos, Logos, and Pathos to appeal the audience feeling. I used the same reasons which is my logos in the Inquiry 3 that set up three reasons to explain my idea. The main topic is Greenwashing, which is a way that the company always used to deceive the customers to buy their product. And
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Because I think pictures can be more persuaded. I chose most of the pictures that are really related to our daily life, such as the products we use every day or we can see when we go to the supermarket. These pictures will give empathy to my audience. Later, I also inserts some picture about the third party certification and their fake version, these pictures is more educated. It shows to the audience who never sees or know the labels before. And when they go to the supermarket next time, they will be more aware and care about how the product look like and do not fool by the company. I am also inserted two YouTube videos inside that will reveal the truth and add more fun to my presentation. And one of the videos is more about the company aspect. Showing the how the company usually do and the reason they like to put the “natural” labels and barn or leaf. The other video is support my “vagueness” idea, I wrote the Arizona case in my essay. I talked about how the Arizona tea print “100% natural” labels on their products but in fact they contain high fructose corn syrup and citric acid. In the video, the guy questions a box of cereals which is funny but have deep meaning behind it. He questions about why the box show 100% natural but when he look at the ingredient. The products contains high fructose corn syrup. It is really similar with my example in my …show more content…
I used the same reason both in essay and remediation because the points I write about is the exactly the truth I want to tell everyone. Even though I used the same reason, but I feel like the media can more interact with my audience, when someone read my essay, they sometimes might feel boring or not interesting enough. And when I read someone else’s essay, I sometimes will skip a line or do not know what I read about. But media can be more attractive, and I can express my idea clearly and add some funny movie that excite their interested. If I do not insert the picture, I cannot even describe the exact same third party labels are. Sometimes even how well the description is, they still not instead of a real picture. Throughout the whole experience, I think it is very
Because I think pictures can be more persuaded. I chose most of the pictures that are really related to our daily life, such as the products we use every day or we can see when we go to the supermarket. These pictures will give empathy to my audience. Later, I also inserts some picture about the third party certification and their fake version, these pictures is more educated. It shows to the audience who never sees or know the labels before. And when they go to the supermarket next time, they will be more aware and care about how the product look like and do not fool by the company. I am also inserted two YouTube videos inside that will reveal the truth and add more fun to my presentation. And one of the videos is more about the company aspect. Showing the how the company usually do and the reason they like to put the “natural” labels and barn or leaf. The other video is support my “vagueness” idea, I wrote the Arizona case in my essay. I talked about how the Arizona tea print “100% natural” labels on their products but in fact they contain high fructose corn syrup and citric acid. In the video, the guy questions a box of cereals which is funny but have deep meaning behind it. He questions about why the box show 100% natural but when he look at the ingredient. The products contains high fructose corn syrup. It is really similar with my example in my …show more content…
I used the same reason both in essay and remediation because the points I write about is the exactly the truth I want to tell everyone. Even though I used the same reason, but I feel like the media can more interact with my audience, when someone read my essay, they sometimes might feel boring or not interesting enough. And when I read someone else’s essay, I sometimes will skip a line or do not know what I read about. But media can be more attractive, and I can express my idea clearly and add some funny movie that excite their interested. If I do not insert the picture, I cannot even describe the exact same third party labels are. Sometimes even how well the description is, they still not instead of a real picture. Throughout the whole experience, I think it is very