The weakest facet of this article is the use of emotions. The author did not provided as plenty as it was for the facts and statistics. The author, Mr. Kristof provided on how Poonam felt during the days she was being used and sell for money. The author input on how Poonam started bleeding and crying after she was being raped to an older man. Also, on how Poonam and the other girls that was in the brothel was told to put a smile on their faces. However, those smiles that are being put out there was just in the outside, deep inside they were hurting and crying. The author should have asked Poonam more on how she felt and how it was like to be in her situations. If the author included more emotions on what Poonam felt, it would have persuaded
