The thesis statement is – “Legislation needs to be changed to grant political asylum to these refugees to help decrease wasted U.S. law enforcement resources, undocumented residency, black market labor, and in turn give better opportunities to these people while also improving America's international image.” This thesis statement is well-written because it provides a lot of details and specific information that the reader needs to know. Also, it provides a lot of points that support the writer's opinion. However, the topic is not clearly stated in the thesis but the reader can still understand because of the good statements and details that are stated.
