Tell You Lies Poem Analysis

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Throughout our creative writing class, there have been many poems or stories that have influenced me. From our classroom, the poem Tell You Lies by Rebecca McIntosh stood out as an influential poem. It was written with such honesty and compassion that it has stuck out in my mind. This poem influenced me to write about my life and what is right in front of me such as cats, washing machines, etc. These poems are about life, which is inspirational in writing poetry and short stories.
I would compare my writing to country songs as they usually are about life with catchy phrases and real-life examples that make people feel something for the characters. I enjoy writing from other perspectives and point of views, which is a challenge I like to give myself. While others may like to write deep things about themselves, I like lighter subjects with humor or unpredictable endings. I want my readers to feel something when reading
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I feel this was more of my strength, and coming up with ideas for a short story was an easy task. Most of my inspiration comes from being at home, sitting on the front porch, or hearing others stories. Although, personally I enjoy reading happy endings, the characters I write about are not me, and this makes it easier to manipulate their lives and choose scenes of departure that end in a grim way. I believe life is valuable, and work to show that in writing.
In my story "The End of the Line", I use imagery of a car that a young man is in love with, thinking it will make him cool. The story is written from the point of view of a young man who is very insecure until he buys a new car. He is eager to impress his girlfriend, coworkers, etc. By comparing a vehicle to an animal, something he loves and cherishes shows his issues with himself. My favorite lines from the story sum it up, "Thin build with glasses, but ultimate coolness. She would make him the man he always wanted to

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