Poem Analysis: On Turning Ten

Improved Essays
Some people value their childhoods and would give anything just to return to that moment for a day, others, however, disregard it, and couldn’t care less. Billy Collins’s poem “On Turning Ten” communicates this idea by describing his childhood as enjoyable, mesmerizing, and remorseful. Through poetic devices such as similes, metaphors, and imagery, Billy Collins offers powerful ideas about the journey of growing up.

During the beginning of the poem, the author uses similes to convey the idea that growing up is painful and you’ll never be able to recover. The author introduces the poem by expressing his pain at merely the thought of growing up. Although there is no visible wound, the author uses a simile to communicate his pain to the reader:
…show more content…
When the author states, “I'm coming down with something, / something worse than any stomach ache / or the headaches I get from reading in bad light” he first lets the reader imagine the pain of a headache or a stomach ache, but then, he adds onto his precious statement by saying that it is something even worse than a stomach ache or a headache, by doing so, he conveys the meaning that his pain is almost unimaginable. Since the speaker in this poem is presumably a child on the verge of turning ten, a stomach ache or headache is most likely the worst pain that they’ve imagined so far in their …show more content…
This quote shows the author's joy of being young, how he didn’t have a care in the world when he was being himself. When the author says, “I could make myself invisible / by drinking a glass of milk a certain way.” it is a memory of the past when he could do anything carelessly and there wouldn’t be any consequences. However, now that he’s growing up, he realizes that he can’t do be careless anymore because his parents won’t always be there to clean up his mistakes. It’s a clear cry for him to come back to reality now because he has to start looking out for

Related Documents

  • Superior Essays

    However, the narrator tries to rid herself of imagination by becoming friends with the popular kids. Throughout the story, the reader can detect how the narrator does not become fully mature and how it impacts and affects those around her. Childhood is meant to be pleasant and creative, but becomes detrimental as people grow and change…

    • 1233 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    From Little Things Big Things Grow The song “From Little Things Big Things Grow” is a song written and released in 1991 by Paul Kelly and is a song about the protest from the Gurindji people and Vincent Lingiari during their argument about land rights at Wave Hill station in August 1966. The Gurindji strike at Wave Hill station was an revolutionary incident that occurred in August of 1966 at Wave Hill station in the Northern Territory. On the eponymous date in 1966, Vincent Lingiari, a spokesman for the Gurindji people, led his fellow Gurindji compatriots and walked off their worksite and began a seven year strike.…

    • 723 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    The transition from childhood to adulthood is often characterized by cultural events, birthdays, puberty, and graduations. Sharon Olds poem, Rite Of Passage, gives an interesting perspective on the transformation. Using beautiful imagery, the reader can visualize a birthday party filled young boys trying to one-up each other. This is first presented when the boys are comparing their ages, “How old are you? Six.…

    • 164 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Parents never want their children to grow up quickly. Li-Young Lee's poem "A Story" explores the complex relationship between father and son through heartfelt recollections of telling stories to his five-year-old. Telling the story from the point of view of the dad, Lee adds a nurturing aspect to the story. The unidentified father looks to the future and sees "the day this boy will go."…

    • 340 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    On the occasion of our anniversary Clementine Von Radics composed “On the occasion of our anniversary”A Girl has been abused for the longest time and she is traumatized by his husband She is t traumatized by the way she says “i still flinch at slamming doors”. Her house has been a mess since his husband hits her and throws objects at her. In this poem she talks about the way she has been mistreated. She believes that her husband has passed thru a lot…

    • 584 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Who are you? Could you answer that in one paragraph? One poem? One song? The identity of an individual can be immensely diverse.…

    • 653 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Sandra Cisneros Eleven

    • 446 Words
    • 2 Pages

    Coming of Age Aging is a biological process that all humans encounter on a daily basis. Most reach consensus that humans learn more information with every passing year, like the memory cloud on an IPhone. Sandra Cisneros uses age to justify people’s actions, as they grow older, in the short story “Eleven”. Cisneros takes the perspective of an eleven-year-old girl and demonstrates how age might be perceived during youth versus the perspective of someone later on in life. She also illustrates how knowledge and behavior that is acquired in earlier years applies throughout entire lifetimes.…

    • 446 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Growing up as a hispanic woman in America has always been more difficult than I thought it was going to be. There were many times where I felt excluded, judged or like I am not as good as other people. Throughout my life this has always affected my happiness because it was never as easy as I wanted it to be. With that being said, many people that are also a different race also struggle with this problem and this affects their wellbeing as well. I came to realize what a struggle being a person of color is to other people as well after carefully reading a short story by Junot Diaz called “Wildwood” and a poem by Claudia Rankine called “From Citizen Six” where both of the characters were treated unfairly, and ran into issues on a daily basis because…

    • 1081 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Mother to Son ` A little over 80% of parents tell their children that life will not be easy but even when life does get hard to never give up. Out of those 80%, 54% tell their children of when they had a hardship and how they overcame it. Similarly in poem “ Mother to Son” written by Langston Hughes, it portrays a mother telling her son that life for her “ ain't been no crystal stair” and it won't be easy for him either. The mother tells how her staircase is full of splinters and has bord torn up but she never gave up. The purpose of “ Mother to Son” is to portray the them even when life gets hard, people should never give up.…

    • 582 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Generally, readers either think the tone is either playful or resentful. In actuality, the poem consists of many more facets of tone. In life, growing up consists of realizing how our childhood experiences made impressions on us as adults. Since this is written in the persona of an adult, mature thoughts and feelings are displayed rather than childish ones. The biggest realization for the speaker is that he was abused as a child.…

    • 600 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    “Another Elegy” is a poem about the relationships in life that happen. In the line “This is what our dying looks like..” gives us as a reader the feeling that we need to believe that when something bad happens, we need to just believe that something that is there. The poem is about someone trying to kill themselves. It happens in the line, “he let the gun go off in his mouth.” Then, all of a sudden, the bad side of the person in the poem comes out.…

    • 955 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    The first quatrain introduces the girl being judged for the first time. In the first quatrain, the peers of the girl judge her physical appearance and her car. After the establishment that many others are judging her, it segways to her feeling more insecure. She begins to stop opening up to others. Many people think she’s weird because she’s not like everyone else.…

    • 1302 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Billy Collins Poetry

    • 956 Words
    • 4 Pages

    Sadness and regret are two emotions you never want to feel, but in the world of Billy Collins’ poetry he utilizes these feelings to reflect on and give a bigger picture to life. In poetry words are never meant to be taken lightly, in fact they are meant to be picked apart, analyzed, and put back together to form a coherent meaning. Sadness in poems are not usually just sob stories but instead are heavy-hearted deliverers of a grander insight into life. Collins successfully conveys a mood of sadness or regret in his two poems “On Turning Ten” and in “Forgetfulness by his use of word choice and overarching connotation.…

    • 956 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Explication of “Where the Sidewalk Ends” Shel Silverstein’s poem “Where the Sidewalk Ends” is an eclectic concoction; it begins with a playful, childlike stock while stirring in a deeper, mature message. The poem starts its journey in a magically enchanting world, but it shifts suddenly as it travels into darkness. To escape, the speaker suggests following the arrows the children have drawn, pointing away from the grimness to “go where the chalk-white arrows go... To the place where the sidewalk ends” (14,16).…

    • 784 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I have read Theodore Roethke’s poem “My Papa’s Waltz” several times, and every I tend to find new insights in it. It is the same old story where a father comes home drunk and mistreats his family. That’s what a reader would think after one reading of it. I expressed I can relate to the son and father’s relationship, along with some of the emotions expressed in the poem.…

    • 1050 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays