Narrative Essay On My Pivotal Moment

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A long time ago, in a galaxy far far away...Well more like last year in New Westminster, is where my pivotal moment took place. It was a cold winter day, but the sun had not yet set over the horizon. I had just gotten out of dance class, and it was a Friday afternoon so I was eager to tackle the weekend and relax. That day I was wearing converse, and it was taking me awhile to tie them up. But I was trying to go quickly because I carpool home from dance classes with my neighbor and I know how I do not like it when she keeps me waiting. So there I was tying up my shoes when all of a sudden my neighbor passes me and with a snarky voice says,
“Hurry up we have to go somewhere”.
Well, this was the first time I had heard this news and through confusion,
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As soon as my parents opened the door to me I could not keep it together any longer. Everything seemed to come crashing down at once I spent the rest of the night talking to my parents through tears or frustration just wanting to escape from being so alone. To me being left behind in this moment made all the difference because it was the breaking point in a long line of exclusions. My pivotal moment is a moment in time with a great impact, but it was what came before that made this moment so important. For years I had been trying to find my place. Through a series of different circumstances, like who was in my school classes and dance classes, I met different people all the time and often tried hanging out with different groups of people. Each one of the different friend groups I had over the years seemed to have failed me for different reasons. In grade 6 I got cut off from my old group of friends due to being in different classes and since they lost interest in me. So through grade 6 and 7 I mostly bonded with the people who surrounded me and by the end of grade 7, I thought I had found the perfect group, in school and in dance. At school, I finally felt as though I belonged for reasons I can still not fully comprehend. This group of

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