Later on Bartels begins to end his essay by explaining his overall pitch of working on Bartels and his wife’s problematic situation. The best way to explain feelings is by expressing a problem, what's wrong with it, and why it makes you feel this way. Making this way of explaining for the essay the best way for the essay. Bartels lead the readers with a guided hand through his situation of mishap. Not only does he manage to get across to his wife that he needs to feel appreciated for what he does, by using “Pitch, Compliant, Moment”, but he also managed to find that he needs to fix his views too.
