Peyton's Game: A Narrative Fiction

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There was a little girl name Peyton.
She doesn’t really get along well with her little sister because, she draws on Peyton’s walls with crayons, so one day she got an idea of asking her mom to go to the park to get away from her little sister.

Peyton said to her mom, “can we please go to the park.” And of course her mom said yes to her.

Peyton was so happy.

She says that her mom is the best in the world.

Peyton immediately ran up the stairs to get on some clothes.

Her body filled with excitement because she got to pick them out.

After a couple of minutes, Peyton picked out a pretty grey shirt with some white arrows and a few pink arrows, along with a pair of her new favorite jeans.

Her body became
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Even though she already knew about it.

Peyton and her mom finished getting ready.

They got into the car and started their adventure to the park.

Peyton was so excited.

She has been waiting all week for this.

“Mom, I’m so happy that you let me go to the park.” Peyton Said “ You’re the best.”

“Well I’m glad that you asked.” her mom Said “It’s beautiful outside today. ”

After about 10 - 15 minutes of driving, Peyton and her mom had reached the park.

It smelled like sweaty dogs at the park, according to Peyton.

Immediately Peyton jumped out of the car and went for the swingset.

She went fast.

“ Peyton slow down! “ Her mom said.

“ Yes ma’am “

Peyton began running as fast as two cars that are about to race.

While Peyton went swinging on the swings, her mom went to just look around at the pretty pink and red roses and the beautifully green grass.

Her mom said that it smells like freshly green grass in the meadow.

Peyton thought that that became really weird.

While Peyton swang on the swingset, she thought of an idea to do a backflip off of the swing while it’s still

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