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Andrew,

Yes lad, I was wearing a heavier belt than I was last week. You have taken this belt many times before, but of course your backside is very sore and tender now, so the licks will have come really keen. If we are to get rid of your rebellious nature, you have to feel the belt keener each day, which means that it has to be laid on harder each day to achieve this. As I am a fair man, you will be pleased to know that comparing today vs previous days, I didn't increment as much how hard I leathered you, exactly because I knew that this belt would be more severe. I'm also sure that you'll be less pleased to know, that the increase in severity tomorrow will be back to normal, as you've been through the step change of taking this heavier belt.
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You had to be punished for your failure with my boots, it's as simple as that, lad. It had to be done and you had to really feel your punishment, so I did lay it on very hard indeed, so that you felt every lick of that belt across your traumatised buttocks. I could tell from your reactions, that you were really feeling each lick and I was hopeful that this would have had a reforming effect. Sadly my hopes were dashed in the evening, lad, when you presented boots again. If you are telling the honest truth, that you spent a great deal of time and effort on my boots, both before lunchtime and between lunchtime and the evening, then you are doing something seriously wrong, lad. You know the rules, lad, and your thrashing was justified and deserved. You needed your backside severely welted and you got just that. Perhaps the searing rushes of pain that you are now feeling, will concentrate your mind in sorting out my boots properly? God help you, lad, if they don't, as otherwise on Tuesday I will then be laying 10 dozen strokes of a cane across your backside. If you think the pain in your backside is bad now, imagine how much more painful double the number of strokes, each laid on harder than yesterday, will be. So, buck your ideas up. lad, and present boots on Tuesday that are up to

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