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Persuasive Writing Assignment trying to convince your parents to buy you a car

>ME
-pay your part
-contribute to car payments, insurance, + upkeep (gas, maintenance)
- part time job, babysit
>BENEFITS
>having your own car would let you be able to…
- drive to a job (helps pay for gas)
- drive to school faster and you get faster to work (= more sleep)
- don’t need parents to drive you to the store or extracurricular activities
- volunteer to help run errands: groceries, etc
>” “
- I know it’s hard for you to drop my sister and me off, get to work on time, and pick us up. A car is a big expense, but i am willing to work for it, and i think it will help with dual-enrollment and college, too.

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