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Wow Statement (Hook): Would you rather be unemployed or in a low-income job because your resume isn’t good enough or get a high paying job that you were able to get because you went to college for a higher education?
Background: Colleges and Universities have been places of higher learning for many centuries.
Background: The very first university in America was Harvard University.
Background: A lot of people who are lucky enough to be accepted into college and graduate have very successful lives.
Lead up: ___________________________________________________________________.
Thesis Statement: College is definitely worth the cost.
Body Paragraph # 1 (Your 2nd Best Reason or sub-argument)
Topic Sentence: The large amount of student …show more content…
Why: “According to the US Congress Joint Economic Committee, approximately 60% of 2011 college graduates have student loan debt balances equal to 60% of their annual income. [37]”
“I” Say: People with college degrees make more money per year on average.
Why: “In 2016, the average income for people 25 years old and older with a high school diploma was $35,615, while the income for those with a bachelor's degree was $65,482, and $92,525 for those with advanced degrees. [110]”
Closing Sentence: A college degree not only helps people get higher paying jobs but people who have a college degree have better health than high school …show more content…
Body Paragraph # 3 (Your Best Reason or sub-argument)
Topic Sentence: A college degree can greatly add onto the career opportunities that graduating high school presents.
They Say: Many people without a college degree are finding jobs that don't require them.
Why: “The following successful people either never enrolled in college or never completed their college degrees: Richard Branson, founder and chairman of the Virgin Group; Charles Culpepper, owner and CEO of Coca Cola; Ellen Degeneres, comedian and actress; Michael Dell, founder of Dell, Inc.; Walt Disney, Disney Corporation founder; Bill Gates, Microsoft founder; Steve Jobs, co-founder of Apple; Wolfgang Puck, chef and restaurateur; Steve Wozniak, co-founder of Apple; Mark Zuckerberg, founder of Facebook. [44]”
“I” Say: People who go to college have more career options available.
Why: “College graduates are more likely to receive on-the-job formal (22.9%) or informal (17.2%) training, more access to technology, greater autonomy, and ability to enhance skills compared to high school
Wow Statement (Hook): Would you rather be unemployed or in a low-income job because your resume isn’t good enough or get a high paying job that you were able to get because you went to college for a higher education?
Background: Colleges and Universities have been places of higher learning for many centuries.
Background: The very first university in America was Harvard University.
Background: A lot of people who are lucky enough to be accepted into college and graduate have very successful lives.
Lead up: ___________________________________________________________________.
Thesis Statement: College is definitely worth the cost.
Body Paragraph # 1 (Your 2nd Best Reason or sub-argument)
Topic Sentence: The large amount of student …show more content…
Why: “According to the US Congress Joint Economic Committee, approximately 60% of 2011 college graduates have student loan debt balances equal to 60% of their annual income. [37]”
“I” Say: People with college degrees make more money per year on average.
Why: “In 2016, the average income for people 25 years old and older with a high school diploma was $35,615, while the income for those with a bachelor's degree was $65,482, and $92,525 for those with advanced degrees. [110]”
Closing Sentence: A college degree not only helps people get higher paying jobs but people who have a college degree have better health than high school …show more content…
Body Paragraph # 3 (Your Best Reason or sub-argument)
Topic Sentence: A college degree can greatly add onto the career opportunities that graduating high school presents.
They Say: Many people without a college degree are finding jobs that don't require them.
Why: “The following successful people either never enrolled in college or never completed their college degrees: Richard Branson, founder and chairman of the Virgin Group; Charles Culpepper, owner and CEO of Coca Cola; Ellen Degeneres, comedian and actress; Michael Dell, founder of Dell, Inc.; Walt Disney, Disney Corporation founder; Bill Gates, Microsoft founder; Steve Jobs, co-founder of Apple; Wolfgang Puck, chef and restaurateur; Steve Wozniak, co-founder of Apple; Mark Zuckerberg, founder of Facebook. [44]”
“I” Say: People who go to college have more career options available.
Why: “College graduates are more likely to receive on-the-job formal (22.9%) or informal (17.2%) training, more access to technology, greater autonomy, and ability to enhance skills compared to high school