Name: Jarren Calizo
Persuasive Self-Evaluation
Organization
What did you do to ensure that your speech was organized/accessible to the audience?
The way I organized my speech was that I had my ideas on my phone and I used it as a guide to present my persuasive speech. The words were in a small font on my phone so I kind of took a bit of pauses here and there that caused me to sound less smooth while presenting. However, I was able to fit in the information and evidence into my presentation that I did not exactly remember in my mind through the use of the information that I had accessible on my phone.
What could you have done to make your ideas more organized/accessible to the audience?
The way that I could have improved the organization of my ideas by enlarging the font size of my notes on my phone. The readability would have been way better while presenting because it wouldn’t take me …show more content…
The part of my delivery that I improved on the most is the minimization of using go-to words and phrases in comparison to my informative speech. I noticed myself not using “basically” or “like” as my key phrases. It felt a bit more soothing without the repetition of words that I used to adopt. Also, I noticed that my eye contact had gotten better from the informative speech. I did not often make it seem clear that I looked at the computer as much as last time.
What aspects of your delivery do you think you will attempt to improve next time?
In terms of the aspects of my delivery that I need to improve, I should minimize the pauses that I have a habit of doing during presentations. These pauses usually make the presentation sound less smooth and less confident when I talk. Also, what ends up in result of these pauses is that my eye contact is not focused onto the audience when I make breaks. My eyes wandered to the ceiling or table whenever it happened. I should improve upon these next time I give a
Persuasive Self-Evaluation
Organization
What did you do to ensure that your speech was organized/accessible to the audience?
The way I organized my speech was that I had my ideas on my phone and I used it as a guide to present my persuasive speech. The words were in a small font on my phone so I kind of took a bit of pauses here and there that caused me to sound less smooth while presenting. However, I was able to fit in the information and evidence into my presentation that I did not exactly remember in my mind through the use of the information that I had accessible on my phone.
What could you have done to make your ideas more organized/accessible to the audience?
The way that I could have improved the organization of my ideas by enlarging the font size of my notes on my phone. The readability would have been way better while presenting because it wouldn’t take me …show more content…
The part of my delivery that I improved on the most is the minimization of using go-to words and phrases in comparison to my informative speech. I noticed myself not using “basically” or “like” as my key phrases. It felt a bit more soothing without the repetition of words that I used to adopt. Also, I noticed that my eye contact had gotten better from the informative speech. I did not often make it seem clear that I looked at the computer as much as last time.
What aspects of your delivery do you think you will attempt to improve next time?
In terms of the aspects of my delivery that I need to improve, I should minimize the pauses that I have a habit of doing during presentations. These pauses usually make the presentation sound less smooth and less confident when I talk. Also, what ends up in result of these pauses is that my eye contact is not focused onto the audience when I make breaks. My eyes wandered to the ceiling or table whenever it happened. I should improve upon these next time I give a