Audience Paragraph Thingy
Since you introduced your topic about legalization of recreational marijuana in Illinois, I believe most of your audience would be the citizens of Illinois. Some of your audiences are entailed with students, adults, and law enforcements. A quote that demonstrates this is “High school and college students will be pulled out of school and put in jail.” Alongside, you mentioned that prisons and jails would be overcrowded, which would make it bad for the state both economically and socially. A solution you proposed is to legalize marijuana, which could potentially decrease crime rate and improve the economy of Illinois. This does a good job because it direct attention to audiences such as students, government, law enforcers,
Since you introduced your topic about legalization of recreational marijuana in Illinois, I believe most of your audience would be the citizens of Illinois. Some of your audiences are entailed with students, adults, and law enforcements. A quote that demonstrates this is “High school and college students will be pulled out of school and put in jail.” Alongside, you mentioned that prisons and jails would be overcrowded, which would make it bad for the state both economically and socially. A solution you proposed is to legalize marijuana, which could potentially decrease crime rate and improve the economy of Illinois. This does a good job because it direct attention to audiences such as students, government, law enforcers,