My writing is better than before. Because in last four month I learn many thing that can improve my writing in future. First, good topic sentence can attract the reader to complete reading. Next, a strong vocabulary can help me to have a strong paragraph. And you need to chose different word and don’t reword the same vocabulary many time. Although a brain storm it is important to remember you about the main idea in the paragraph. And you need at least six to ten sentences in your paragraph to be in correct order. You can’t use example in the begging of your paragraph or essay.
