Persuasive Essay Swimming

Kids from all over the world like to swim. So why don't we make it to where there are more sports for them to play while they are in the swimming pool? We could do surfing in the pool, basketball, football. The schools that have swimming as a sport should make it to where they can be able to play sports while swimming because they can get more people to join, get fit, and that the kids may get too competitive.

Altho it would probably be hard to do football in the pool, we could get way more kids to start swimming. When the kids are playing football, basketball, baseball etc. So for this we need to make it where the kids can have fun but at the same time the kids can learn how to play as a team. This would also be good for them because they can make new friends. This is also good for them because they can become fit. This would also be good for them because as it states in the article “The kids need to be active. So therefore we need to make more sports for them in the swimming pool” (Minnesota). Over all this would be good for the kids because we can get them to be more fit. …show more content…
Like I said in the paragraph above this would be good for them to add more sports in the swimming pool. The reason it would be good for them to get more sports in the pool because they can get fit. This would be good because when they get fit they can try out for other sports. This would also be good because if they chose to do swimming then they can possibly go to the olympics. This would be good because then when the kids go to school they would not get made fun of because they can be one team and get in no fights and things like that. As it states in the text “Kids need to do sports so they can be pro's”