This is Rafid. and I apologize for spelling Kanye's name wrong. However, there shouldn't be any other minor errors expect for the formal tone. If you still find errors of any sort, please point them out to me for better contents in the future.
For the formal tone, I was told at the CJ office that my biography writing is fine as it is. Moreover, because and if you want me to take a more casual tone on biographies, please let me know who are the audiences you are targeting this website for. I believe knowing that will help me write in whatever direction it is required and help the website be more friendly. It gets tricky writing to someone you don't know. I believe you understand.
For the formal tone, I was told at the CJ office that my biography writing is fine as it is. Moreover, because and if you want me to take a more casual tone on biographies, please let me know who are the audiences you are targeting this website for. I believe knowing that will help me write in whatever direction it is required and help the website be more friendly. It gets tricky writing to someone you don't know. I believe you understand.