While writing an essay I do revising a lot. Even if it is a sentence, a word, or a paragraph. Whatever I write down, I look at it again and again because I don’t want to make any mistakes. Before I never revised, I would just summit the paper without revising. When I start to come to college, I realize that I have to make changes and revise a lot of times. Even when I …show more content…
The writer gives many information about what actually happened to them. Readers can easily understand what the writer is talking about. In the first essay, the writer did argument many times, but in the second essay, the writer did argument once. The writer also did research before writing the essay. Readers can see many examples in the essay one. There are many evidence in the essay to support. Readers have to focus more in the essay to understand. There are not so many supporting details in the second essay. It is not hard to understand for readers in second essay. The writer didn’t do