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Chapter Two

I was now driving down the road with a girl I didn't even know, but who thought she knew me. I couldn't imagine what Brad and my mom were thinking right now and how am I going to explain this when I get back to them? My mom is really protective over me as well, despite her blunt questions. I know I had to come up with a good excuse to explain to her.

'I have a twin sister who went to the Bahamas to find our birth parents, but she didn't take me. Sounds weird and suspicious and I am a little offended, but she said she knows it's them so I just didn't say anything'. Though it was the truth, its too random to believe

"Where are we going exactly?" The girl answers taking an exit off the interstate. "Crenshaw Plaza. Its at the
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I ran after them, but by the time I got back to the dining room he was gone. The oversized guy still there, people now surrounding him checking his pulse. The elderly lady now finishing her chicken nugget and the little girl is gone.

The girl was in her car staring at me, although the car door was open as if she had just got back in.

"Were you in the bathroom?". I asked, trying not to sound too panicked. "No, I opened the door for some fresh air. Why?". I tried to calm my breathing down from all of that running.

"Someone was in the bathroom while I was on the phone. As if they were eavesdropping".

"I'm sure it was nothing, you're just paranoid "

"No, I don't think so. Someone had me trapped in the bathroom".

" I'm sure a trio to the mall will take your mind off of things".

I got back into the car and we got back on the interstate. "Can you go faster please?". I didn't wanna sound too bossy, but maybe that's how Isabella was because she answered as if it was okay.

After 10 more minutes of driving and listening to Paramore, we finally arrived at the mall. I saw the girl run in front of me as if she was trying to get somewhere. "Come here, you have to see

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