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Summer nights are the time for romance. After 18 years, I finally got to experience what only happens in movies. I was exhausted after spending the day with Stone, my boyfriend. We had a spectacular day running errands and just hanging out together. I expressed to Stone my feelings about the day. I told him I could not imagine how the evening could get better. Stone looked at me and I could see the adventure forming in his eyes. He quickly jumped up without a word and tossed my shoes towards me. Stone made me promise that once we got to the special place I would not look back until he said so. We arrived at a small mountain in Priceville. The uphill hike was simple at first until we changed directions. Stone took me through a wet wooded area.

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