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“No…...dad” I whimpered as I gazed at the fin encircling him as he treaded water in the Gulf of Mexico.
I looked at his sad hazel eyes as he whispered goodbye to me silently. My feet were standing on the hot grainy southern sand of Florida. The blue cloudless sunny sky was painted over us as the sun shimmered on the water as the break of noon began. The corner of my teal blue eyes were stinging with tears as the cool water’s washed up on my sandy feet.
My mother and brothers were back at the Sanibel Moorings condominium(the place we were staying) and would never know the tension the guilt or the sadness that I felt that day as I watched my dad on the verge of tears. When fear is experienced you sometimes can never explain how it really felt and what was really going on in your heart and mind.
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No I couldn't do that then we would both get eaten. Should I call for help? No that would startle the shark and then he would attack. Should I climb on one of the rocks and try to distract the shark? No then I would be just adding to his meal. My mind was swimming and I was about to scream and it was inching up my pharynx when it got lost at my tongue. I can’t let him die, not my dad. Not the dad that saw me when I was born,not the dad that raked the colorful autumn leaves and practiced softball with me,not the dad that helped me with homework,not the dad in the whole entire Milky way that loved

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