Personal Narrative

Improved Essays
When we were Locked out of our House

We were coming back home passing through town and into our neighborhood it was a long car ride.She didn't have a garage opener so when we came home we waited for someone to open the door then my mom just remembered that she left her keys inside ,so we didn't know what to do. We went to the backyard and tried to open the backdoor but we couldn't so me and my cousin climbed the fence and then we went to the little park in the field behind our house. We played and played then I saw my uncle and dad take off the window too our house we were playing tag then “TAG! Your it” said my cousin while I was looking
“HEY I WASN'T PAYING ATTENTION!” I yelled
“Well your it” he said. I felt like mad because I was looking at my sister I was chasing after him I ran and ran ,and then I got my cousin and then I saw my sister jumping through the window that was taken off while he was counting to ten. My cousin was chasing my other cousin they were coming this was so I went down the slide. I got away and my cousin was coming down.
…show more content…
I waited at the slide, then she came up so then I slid down. I said “AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”
She followed me I ran around the playground.I went up she ran, and then she got me.Then I started counting and when I finished I got my other cousin I knew by now they were probably inside so we went and played tag for 15 more minutes. Then my mom appeared looking over the fence and said “We unlocked the house why don’t you keep playing

Related Documents

  • Decent Essays

    It was late on a Friday night, my mom came into my room and woke me up. She said "there was a bad wreck in rainsville that involved three teenagers and I think one of them was Kymber. " Kymber was my fifteen year old cousin. We called my maw maw and asked her if she knew anything about the wreck and she said "yes Kymber was involved and two boys and they were all medflighted to Erlanger.…

    • 331 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    9/11 Short Stories

    • 476 Words
    • 2 Pages

    It was a dark night. I was home alone. I was watching the movie Ride Along. All of a sudden i hear “”, the errrrrr door opens and I hid. I ran to the laundry room and closed the door.…

    • 476 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    This summer I met a girl at the mall named Brooklyn from Sioux Falls, she is about 5 foot and had gauges and a tongue piercing, brown eyes and dirty blonde hair. We both started talking while we both liked the same poster at spencers, a store at the mall and reluctantly she gave me her snapchat and we talked all day and all night. When the fair came to town we both decided to go together. We were having, riding rides…

    • 555 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Road Monologue

    • 738 Words
    • 3 Pages

    one day on a little prairie lived a little cottage not far from the village the family of 4 enjoyed their life there but that soon changed all of it! “Ma! tata! i want to play outside” okay jojo be safe said ma”so I ran up to my room and grabbed my toys and ran out the door. rosey the older sister of jojo sat and red her favorite book by the fire why mom sewed soon tata got in his car and cranked down the windows and “yelled rosey comin lets go” .Rosey…

    • 738 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I called my brother but he was at the movies with his friends. The man started knocking on the door, but when I looked outside he has disappeared, I took my pepper spray out for self-defense. I locked my room, and then the power went out. I turned on the flash light…

    • 839 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    My friends and I decided to sneak into the abandoned asylum just outside of town. We wish we never would have gone inside. So when we went in we heard a scary noise and ran out then I said ¨Let´s play basketball that will get that scary voice out our mind. Then when we was playing nobody else was there except Aj, Jeanisha and I all we heard was a ball bounce and we saw a person behind us he asked us do yall want to play a 2 vs 2. You know we said yes because we love basketball, we asked what his name is he said “Bear.¨ Then we played are basketball game.…

    • 454 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Once there we decided instead of video games we would play with the neighbors in the apartment complex where she lived. As we were playing our infinite round of hide and seek the neighbors mother called “girls it’s time to come…

    • 938 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Put the bottle down Draft Growing up my Dad was an alcoholic. But he was never a mean drunk. He just got upset really easily. Especially if thing were left out like the night that my mom had done laundry she folded my clothes right before she went to bed but left my clothes basket in the laundry room to put them away the next morning. My dad found them and then when to throw them out.…

    • 327 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    One morning, sunny day I was ready to go to Kansas City not expecting anything ever bad would happen. Everyone packed up and we headed towards Kansas City, we were going to visit my cousins. When we got there we got our stuff and unpacked upstairs in the guest rooms, my older cousin left to party the night before, but he didn’t come back. After a while of talking the kids got bored and ran up the stairs to the rooms where everyone was either playing games or on their phones texting. Then out of nowhere my younger cousin Matthew who was 1 at the time said “Tag you're it you can’t find me uncle.”…

    • 428 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    It was summer in Tucson Arizona and my stupid little sister was bothering my older brother and my mom was cooking breakfast and my dad was outside talking to the next door neighbour about something as for me I was going to spend time with my best friend kat and we were going treasure hunting on kat granddad's land kat granddad was a old funny kinda man he let us dig up so many holes on his farm in till we were too tired to dig anymore but that was last year but this time we have to sneak onto the farm because kat granddad died last year and this mean banker bought it after he died. As I start to get up out my bed to head to the bathroom to freshen up my little sister ran right past me and ran inside of the bathroom it felt like she was…

    • 447 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Car Crash Narrative

    • 790 Words
    • 4 Pages

    On August 11th, 2011 my mama and I were in a car crash. The day started out normal. We needed some groceries so we decided to go to Meijer. We got dressed and decided to go in about an hour. So i am playing with my barbie computer until we have to leave.…

    • 790 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Define “Normal” About 2 months later, Mom, chuckie, michael, and I were sitting on the couch watching a movie. When we were all about to go to bed I saw a letter go through the door. I was the only one that had seen the letter. So i picked it up, it said to: antonia from: and the name was crossed out in sharpie. Mom was tucking in chuckie and michael.…

    • 1926 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Cabin Short Story

    • 538 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Cabin story It was a hot summer day me and my family and my friend Anneke were packing up to go camping trip at the lake. We have been there many times but we have heard that there is a new trail you can go through. We were just getting ready to head out the door when we realized we forgot our dog in my room. Me and Anneke ran up stairs and got my dog grabbed a leash and went out the door. Sooner or later we got to the lake and we set up the three roomed tent for me and Anneke while my mom and step dad set up the camper for them and my brother and sister.…

    • 538 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    I awoke quickly in the pitch black bedroom from a sound down the hall, my best friend laying beside me still in a deep sleep. As I lay still, (deathly still, deathly quiet, lifeless) I think to my self, “ am I hearing things, have I gone crazy?” (delirious, insane) I hear the noise coming from down the hall, I jump up and cautiously walk toward the bedroom door, the slightest light shining off from my alarm clock is glaring threw the dark (Lightless) bedroom.…

    • 915 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Fall just began. The now dead, but ironically full of color leaves, begin to float their way down to concrete sidewalks and asphalt streets. The first month of my initial year of highschool passes by with a blink of my stressed, full of homework, and freshman worried eyes. It was my mother’s birthday the day I first heard the news.…

    • 1417 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays