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Once again this was an amazing experience. Not as easy as I thought I would be, but still particularly pleasant. I really enjoyed describing the little-things-gone-unnoticed and call upon my reader’s senses. As a matter of fact, that is my favorite writing style but I never thought it took that much. I woke up, payed attention to the sounds around me but I had to leave my place, with my block note on a little trip with a constant focus on things like how the temperature felt on my skin, the vehicles around me, the scent and sounds in my car, etc., so many of the sounds and smell and feelings I never really consciously notice around me.
Of course, using figures of speech like metaphor, onomatopoeia and personification helped me a great deal.

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