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It all began with a simple phone call one night after dinner, “Joe” my father hollered up the stairs, “it’s for you. It’s Jackie, and she sounds upset.” As I came downstairs to pick up the phone, I was not happy. I was tired and had looked forward to a nice quiet evening at home, not another stupid adventure with Jackie.
Thirty minutes later, however, Jackie’s silver Mustang convertible swung into our driveway, and Jackie was leaning on the horn before the car came to a full stop. Grabbing my coat from the couch, I walked out my front door with all enthusiasm of a man going to stand before a firing squad.
While jogging to the car I notice something different there was a figure in the back seat. It was night so I couldn’t really see it until
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This private bank had deposit boxes worth millions, and at the time we didn't know it. We went over our plan to steal a certain deposit box. Now all we had to do was make it in time before the police show. Jordan and I put our masks on and went in, Jordan pointed the guns at the civilians and clerks. I sprinted to the back and reach into my bag for the c4 to blast open the door. I planted the c4 and ran a safe distance to blast it open. There was a loud bang and all of the sirens went on. I went inside looked for deposit number five hundred and six. I found it quickly. I laid my bag down took out the power drill, and where the keyhole was at drilled a hole through it. I was sweating it took thirty seconds for the drill to reach the end. There was a loud pop then the deposit box came out of the socket. I stuffed everything in my bag and ran. “Lets go!” I yelled to Jordan, who was occupying the people in front. Jill than pulled up really close as soon as she saw us. “Get in! Get in! Get in!” She repeatedly blurted. We could hear the sirens in the background, they were closing in fast. We got in the car and we took off like a rocket. Jackie’s Mustang was modified, her car could go zero to sixty in 3.5 seconds. The cops never got to see the car like always and we escaped like always and retreated to our warehouse.
Jackie, Jordan, and I were so anxious to see what was in the box that we all ran to the table area. “Pull
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“Where’s my money,” he demanded.
“We don’t ha….,” before I could even finish he yelled “bullshit”.
He sent Five men down the warehouse to retrieve the money. Twenty minutes later they came back with, which seems all of the money we hid. “How much is it?” he asked one of his goons.
“About two million sir,” he replied.
“Where is the rest of the money?” he asked me.
“Thats all of it,” I told him.
“Are you serious” he snapped. “And you sold all of my jewelry?” he asked.
“Yes,” I replied.
“You guy think I’m dumb,” he shouted. “I know how much my own jewels are worth,” “But thats all of it,” I insisted in a small voice.
“You guys better figure out a way to get my money,” he hollered at us. “I need five more million back,” he demanded.
He then snapped his fingers and one of the biggest goons came out with a bat and one of them grabbed me. They beat me until I fainted.
I woke up with Jordan and Jackie with their backs towards me talking about how we are going to get him his money. We owed the guy five million and he knew everything about us. “Why don’t we just steal the jewels back,” I told them in a

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