After writing my narrative, I feel that I told the story quite well. I believe I did because my personal narrative takes the reader on my journey to reading with confidence. In the text I give the readers insight into why I struggled with reading out loud and how I overcame it. I think that my piece of writing can be improved by creating more descriptive memories. For example, in the first two paragraph I describe my teacher Mrs. Robinson, but I never describe the atmosphere of the classroom. Additionally, I could have added more detail in the final paragraphs about how I became the child in class to raise their hand to read a text, rather than hide like it did for years. When we were assigned to write a literary narrative a lot of memories,
