Personal Narrative: Why I Need To Move

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"Judy , I wish we didn't have to move , I am going to miss you so much . You are my BFF. your always there for me when I am down you listen and you give me the best solution. I promise to call you and text you every day ,bye" Kristal hung up the phone in tears. Judy Sammy black curly hair , brown eyes ,smile bright as the sun. Kristal sans , 17 year old, skin fair as the sand , 5'4 , skinny , has brown straight hair , and blue eyes .The reason why Kristal is so upset is because Kristal and her family are moving to California, her dad Ron , found a job there in a computer company . The main reason for their moving was because something was not right in Houston first, her Uncle Bob disappeared without a trace , and the police couldn't find him . Then Kristal's dad's cousin's brother's family got …show more content…
Too bad for you Kristal I am going to have to kill you I was about to kill you anyways . " Kristal screamed loudly for help , uncle Bob put his hands on her mouth to silence her from screaming. He started to strangle Kristal. Just as her face turned red and blue, the police man appeared , "Let her go ,hands up in the air or I will shoot you, " said the police man. That moment when the police came Kristal realized that her voice was heard by the police, she felt like the police man was an angel sent from above. Kristal passes out that moment from the suffocation . The next day Kristal found herself in the hospital ,mom (Susan) was sitting next to her."How are you sweetie, how are you feeling? ""I am fine mom ,it was uncle Bob who murdered daddy." "I know sweetie .Uncle Bob did it for million dollars your daddy was going to inherit on his 45th birthday .Bob was jealous your grand dad left it all to your father . See Kristal, your grand dad had warned him to change his ill ways . Uncle Bob was criminal, an alcoholic ,a party goers. He never worked a day in his

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